That's a unique concept. I like how the burning halo almost looks like a crown. The girl has an air of mystery that I like. Fallen angel? Demon in disguise? Who's to say...

I know that's a 3D model and can't necessarily be "wrong" but something is bothering me about her shoulders, they look too wide perhaps. And although it's a tiny little nitpick, her lips appear to blend in too much with the background because of all the red; perhaps if the background were less saturated...

Overall, pretty cool though.

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Thanks. I wasn't really focusing on a story, just a look and a couple main elements.
My main focus was the halo and the flames around it. Secondary to that was the skin. I did several effects in photoshop to enhance the skin. I wasn't really concerned with the anatomy, hair or outfit. I just wanted to get the idea out before I got too frustrated because I was working on my laptop instead of my normal art rig.
The problem you are noticing with the shoulders is a common one with that model. I think the head is a little small and throws off that ratio you'd normally want.
The makeup was what came with the skin .mat and matched the fire I wanted to use. This will likely transform into my springtime or summer wallpaper so I might fix the clash with the background.
Thanks for the feedback.

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Kickin piece man, nice details!

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Thanks.

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very very cool!!!!

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Thanks!!

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